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Feedback For Drafts.

My peers evaluated my drafts for my magazine, and this is a summery of their comments:
Genre: Indie

Audience: The audience that my peers guessed were ranged from teenagers to mid twenties, which is what I was aiming for .

Success: Matched the mark scheme very well, the use of wire as prop, fonts and shaddows, large background dps, good colour scheme.

Improvements: Experiment with different angle pics.
Average Level: Mid 4